Imaging Performance of a Multimodal Module to Enhance Preclinical Irradiator Capabilities
Imaging Performance of a Multimodal Module to Enhance Preclinical Irradiator Capabilities
Review Data
Purpose and Significance of Study: This study assesses the imaging performance of a new multimodal module of an OptiMAX device and finds it suitable for enhanced irradiation preclinically.
Fit with Scope of Journal: The manuscript is of high interest for the journal Clinical Oncology and Research.
There are several errors (already corrected in the galley proof) in the manuscript. The common ones are –
· Omission of articles, e.g., omission of “the” before “tissue” in the 5th sentence of the 1st paragraph in the Introduction section, omission of “the” before “efficiency” in the 5th sentence of the 2nd paragraph in the Introduction section, and so on.
· Omission of “,”, e.g., after “feasible” in the 4th sentence of the 1st paragraph in the Abstract section, after “pixels” in the 2nd sentence of OptiMAX device under Materials and Methods, and so on.
· “X ray” must be hyphenated in all the places.
o The other errors are listed below –
In the Abstract section –
In the 1st paragraph –
· In the 2nd sentence, “to acquire” must be replaced by “acquiring”.
· In the 3rd sentence, “in” must be replaced with “of”.
· In the 7th sentence, “for contrast of 32:1 and 5s acquisition” must be put within brackets.
In the 2nd paragraph –
· “device” must be replaced with “device’s” and “laboratories” must be replaced with “laboratory”.
In the Introduction section –
In the 1st paragraph –
· In the 4th sentence, “that form” must be replaced with “and formation of”.
· In the 5th sentence, “imaged” must be replaced with “detected” and “cells” must be replaced with “cell”.
In the 2nd paragraph –
· In the 9th sentence, “do” after “BLI” must be replaced with “does”.
· In the 10th sentence, “additional information” must be replaced with “information additional”.
In the Materials and Methods section –
Under OptiMAX device –
· In the 1st sentence, “in” must be replaced by “of”.
Under Radiographic performance –
Under Spatial resolution –
In the 2nd paragraph –
· In the 2nd sentence, “to” must be inserted before “0.95”.
Under Signal to noise ratio and homogeneity –
· In the last sentence, “these two latter” must be replaced with “the latter two”.
Under Contrast –
· In the 2nd sentence, “Cu” must be replaced with “copper”.
· In the last sentence, “study” must be replaced with “studies”, and “to” must be inserted after “prior”.
Under Physical assessment of luminescence performance –
Under Spatial resolution –
· In the 2nd sentence, “removed” must be replaced by “remove”.
· In the 5th sentence, “to” must be inserted after “prior”.
Under Contrast –
· In the 2nd sentence, “than for” must be replaced with “as the”.
· In the 3rd sentence, “were” must be replaced with “was”.
· In the 4th sentence, “system” must be replaced with “system’s”, “considered” must be replaced by “concerned”, and “were” must be replaced with “where”.
Under Biological assessment –
Under Cell culture –
In the 1st paragraph –
· In the 1st sentence, “were” must be replaced by “was”.
In the 2nd paragraph –
· In the 1st sentence, “respectively” must be removed.
In the Results and Discussion section –
In the 3rd paragraph –
· In the 2nd sentence, “Cu” must be replaced with “copper”, and “we” must be replaced with “the”.
In the 4th paragraph –
· In the 5th sentence, “in” before “average” must be replaced with “on”, and “.” Must be inserted before “then”.
· In the 7th sentence, “concentration” must be in plural form.
· In the last sentence, “began to be” must be replaced by “was”.
In the 5th paragraph –
· In the 1st sentence, “cells” must be replaced with “cell”.
· In the last sentence, “to” must be replaced with “of”.
In the Conclusion section –
· In the 3rd sentence, “showed also” must be replaced with “also showed”.
Joël Daouk
Justine Jubréaux
Alicia Chateau
Hervé Schohn
Sophie Pinel
Author Info
Corresponding Author
Sophie Pinel
CRAN, BioSiS Department, UMR Université de Lorraine-CNRS 7039, Nancy, France
Article Info
Article Type
Research Article
Publication history
Received: Tue 21, Jan 2020
Accepted: Sat 08, Feb 2020
Published: Fri 28, Feb 2020
Copyright
© 2023 Sophie Pinel. This is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. Hosting by Science Repository.
DOI: 10.31487/j.COR.2020.02.01