“They Find Ways to Make the Vegetables Taste Nicer” – Increased Fruit and Vegetable Consumption with the Garden to Table Programme in Four New Zealand Schools
“They Find Ways to Make the Vegetables Taste Nicer” – Increased Fruit and Vegetable Consumption with the Garden to Table Programme in Four New Zealand Schools
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A: Good
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Discussion & Conclusion
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Comments: The Discussion explains the influence of the garden to table programme on the behavioural changes of the children under study, which has also enhanced their knowledge in better understanding the healthy foods.
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Further comments on the paper
Comments: A 3-year prospective cohort study which evaluates a garden to table (GTT) programme in low decile Wellington schools in New Zealand which includes students and children in anthropometric measurements and focus groups. This study further demonstrates gardening interventions that increased the positive behaviour towards understanding of nutrition and creating a personal connection between children and food they have grown which in turn increases the willingness to try new vegetables and fruits. The study also says that further research is necessary to understand the translation of the positive interest in healthy foods into sustained behavioural changes and the patterns that facilitate it.
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Author Info
Amber Parry Strong Cecilia Ross Tessa Clarke Mark Weatherall Jeremy Krebs
Corresponding Author
Amber Parry StrongCentre for Endocrine, Diabetes & Obesity Research, Wellington Hospital, Wellington, New Zealand
Article Info
Article Type
Research ArticlePublication history
Received: Tue 28, Jul 2020Accepted: Tue 11, Aug 2020
Published: Fri 21, Aug 2020
Copyright
© 2023 Amber Parry Strong. This is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. Hosting by Science Repository.DOI: 10.31487/j.JFNM.2020.02.06